last line

Currently listening to: Damn I Wish I Was Your Lover – Sophie B. Hawkins

Damn, I wish I was your loverI’ll rock you ’til the daylight comesMake sure you are smilin’ and warmI am everything, tonight I’ll be your motherI’ll do such things to ease your painFree your mind and you won’t feel ashamed

It would go something like this:

If I ever see him again, I won’t say a word—but he’ll know by the way I exhale…

or

He said goodbye with his mouth, but not his eyes—and I’ve been haunted ever since.

What would be your last line?


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18 responses to “last line”

  1. Nicholas K F Matte Avatar

    I should of grabbed those ts one last time?

    1. justrojie Avatar

      😂

  2. Jesse Pallante Avatar

    Something that could have been is never going to happen, just walk away, with down-cast eyes.

    1. justrojie Avatar

      Nicely written

      1. Jesse Pallante Avatar

        Thank you 😊

  3. ibarynt Avatar

    Oh my gosh, where did you get this from? That question is making me think thoughts I should not 🤣…

    Your last line is too good. Let me go and dream about this 😅

    1. justrojie Avatar

      Thank youuuu, my brain is always thinking of the what ifs. Lolol ok!!! Let me know what you come up with x

      1. ibarynt Avatar

        Hehehe… oh the imagination train has to be on 😁

  4. Info-Man Avatar

    ‘And her last line was ,”Sunset is beautiful isn’t it .” He never understood that. ‘
    ( That line is a metaphor used to say, I love you but I am letting you go )

    1. justrojie Avatar

      🥺🥺🥺

      1. Info-Man Avatar

        Lol was it too emotional 😂😂 i sometimes write emotional things and forget 🤣

        1. justrojie Avatar

          😆 it was gooooood !!!

  5. Michael Williams Avatar

    those are beautiful lines Ro! like really beautiful. Mike

    1. justrojie Avatar

      Aw thank you so much Mike!!!

  6. ianmdudley Avatar

    “I’d never dug a hole so deep or filled it back up so quickly.

    The next year’s tomato crop was amazing.”

    1. justrojie Avatar

      😂

  7. Maddie Cochere Avatar

    Oooh, those are good last lines. Lots of feeling and emotion.

    Me? Been there; done that. My last words to him via text: You could never find a way to tell me you loved me. I had to leave.

    Sigh.

    1. justrojie Avatar

      Double le sigh… idk what I would do if I got that text

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